Come close again
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Open you heart face the pain,
Smile and come close again.
Let me feel your breath on my skin,
Let me out , so I can let you in.
I love you still, or can't you see?!
You , You mean the world to me.
But what have I left if your not here.
I'd give my all to have you near.
You voice awakes me in many ways,
I have yearned for you night and days
Open your heart face the pain,
Smile and come close again.
I am not the same, am not so strong
you are that light that shone me along.
I hold like on a thread, I have no choice.
My only survival is your voice.
That's all that's left of me and you.
one lil' jigsaw piece to carry me through
but once it's gone and we part together.
I know I will have lost you forever.
So, I hold on with a last hope in me
Its not so plain or simple to be
in this darkness where you hide me again
I taste your blood but you feel no pain.
I lay alone in the blue night,
I wander how far I've come to fight.
I gave up so I could keep you safe.
Was, I so easy to replace?!
I fall asleep, I face death
I lose touch and my last breath
but as day light calls in the morning fresh
I stand up and try again.
You were so strong in your lightened mist,
you locked away my reason to exist.
I feel you each and every day, don't deny me
just sit, and pray.
You saw an ocean form in my eyes,
You sat still , no surprise.
But I felt you , to this day
little fears you failed to say.
Love me or love me not.
it only hurts what you forgot
we made an oath and promised forever
so even apart we're still together.
You have always kept one foot outside the door
But the less i had you, I wanted more.
your burning so hot in my boiling blood.
Trust me I'd die, If I could.
My sins have formed quite a queue
I wont go alone, I'll be waiting for you.
Explain why you shook hands with fate
then sold my soul, my love and wait...
Open your heart and feel the pain
Smile and come close again.
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Again thank you 4elements
Its coming from within my heart,
that's where the power is,
It begins that way from the start
and end's in something like this.
Well where ever it comes from dont lose it. You are a talent with words
:) thank you 4elements
You have an interesting style of writing, Leptirela.
Well I must say, you do follow your heart, so truth be known, you and I are off to a intriguingly great start...
I can see that, inevitably, I'm joining your "long lost family of followers," my newest dear friend...
hehehe Welcome bbnix :)
Thank you for such comment :)
And am looking forward to your hubs
WOW, I love the very way you expressed(in my eyes i mean) letting you out of yourself to make room for his love. That is beautiful. To let go of self is an amazing feeling. Up and beautiful Leptirela, wonderful.
Johnny Love
You Johnny Love are SPOT ON about this..
Sacrificing yourself and letting go of so much to 'make room' for this love takes a lot.
But if this is the only way I keep him in my life , then the words have to keep flowing :) I only have him in these words, yet I love him with my soul! ...
Thank you Johnny Love , not just for visiting my hub...
but for actually reading between the lines in this piece of poetry :) your amazing.
I find your words lovely and painful. I too know this pain and even though it hurts, it is beautiful to be able to feel.
I agree with you there Johnny Love :)
Sometimes when all is lost, all you have left, is the pain or memories and just feeling it makes you somewhat alive still... and Deep fear of losing that feeling means losing it all for good. I never gave up , I 'm still learning to go forward and this feeling I have left is what's giving me the strength :)
I find that pain is the greatest teacher. Knowing the depth of what love truly is. I am willing to take a bullet, get hit by a car, take the fear away, well truth be told i am will to give everything i am to protect the one i love. Painful yes, but worth it.
You are so right Johnny Love.
I have been tested so many times, out of all the darkness
I have come to a beautiful place now where i rest and accept it how it is, I can't change it.
This kind of love, is where you look but don't touch and the more resistant it is the harder it is to stay away.
heheh but I WON ! ... I have a wound as a trophy to remember what I accomplished throughout it. And the more I learn to be content with it and set it free , I am a step closer to beauty.
Beauty is more than just what you see, but what you are blessed to feel. Inside of each breath you take is a little more life than before. Each heartbeat spoken for, each second unwasted in eyes so blind by the pain of ever knowing love. beautiful this makes you.
hehehe Indeed :) Should I say any more?!
I am just about to have a lil' break as I have a block with what am doing at the moment, then I shall make some vanilla tea and come back to read your hubs.
Your hubs portray me in detail 'I was beautiful with you' Is amazing
but I have more to read so expect lots from me :)
I try not to expect,but i will do my best to do just that. Enjoy your tea.
I'm impressed, really ...
You have style for every word..:)
Thank you :)
much appreciated
I love poetry - tried it myself a few times. You seem to have a great knack for it. I also love your photos. They bring instant feeling.
SamboRambo many thanks for the comments :)
Yes indeed the pictures do give out a feeling.
:)
......yes I will come back ..... to be close with you again my friend - it has been so lovely interacting with you and sharing our writing together - please stay well and keep thinking those good thoughts - and for me there is no pain here just the pleasure of reading a very good writer .......
Your words mean a lot fellow earthling :)
There is a beauty in sharing
our writing and I hope it lasts a long, long time :)
Besides it takes one to know one :)
....and you bring me down to earth and make me feel appreciated .....and thank you for that - my feet are firmly planted on solid ground ......
HEHE ::epigramman:: I'm not done yet
I have tens of your Hubs to go through yet
and may I say I'm always inspired
I think it is possible to become addicted to someone, and perhaps some of that is in this great poem. Not wanting to let go that special person is usually love telling us something important about ourselves too. I love the emotional journey you experience and are so well able to articulate in poetry here. Fantastic poem. Thank you. :D
Thank you for the compliment ::Astra Nomik::
I adore your work, I admire it with enviness :)
And I am happy to have you observe my writing,
I think you have this perfectly figured out and it certainly was , an emotional journey :)
I could feel the pain and lose here, very beautiful!
This is very deep! I really enjoy this. My favorite line is "I taste your blood but you feel no pain." Its like you and the other individual are bounded together by this unbreakable force. Keep up the good work!
Thanks Alphonso am nowhere near as good as you,
pleasure to have you here
Wow, I couldn't wait to keep reading this poem, like a story, wanting to know what was going to happen next! By the end I felt sad. Your poetry is so moving.
Voted beautiful, a voice of mind with spirit.
thank you misty95 :)
what a beautiful expression you've got leptirela each and every word bears paramount significance and the style of expressing is just awesome. for a moment i became speechless and i wish could also write like you!! thanks a lot for sharing and take care.
Thank you waleeds
I know our hubs are on very different levels
and I'm happy you have stopped by to read my hub :)
4elements 13 months ago
Wow, very powerful this was. I thought it was awesome. I can relate to it. Thank you for sharing, peace, love, and light