Fall Again
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Fall Again
A decade has passed by,
or hadn't you noticed?!
there goes that 'time flies'
Leaving, was your motive.
Your hand in the hand of my heart
I feel pain in the silence dark
as you tug at my veins
waiting for my last breath,
so that you make your mark.
Your words, unconscious
like bullets aim at my heart.
You think I don't feel you?!
everytime your shooting starts?!
Tears, like snowflakes,
slide and melt into my skin.
Making pores even stronger
for the war to start within.
Whilst each word you say remains,
like a dream untold.
And every time I hear your breath
The truth begins to unfold.
Love is not in words
but more in what you show
You need to feed a hungry heart
in order to make it grow.
The more I need you the less your here
everything begins to fade.
then I close my eyes and know your near
am living in the shadow of my shade
Like a stranger you call me
and think I don't know
How much you feel my pain,
then I hear your voice and become so weak
and fall in love with you again.
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Ah, the pain of a lost love. You captured it. I love that pic, too.
great way to express the pain that follows love. Perfect company. I truly love the line,"your hand in the hand of my heart". beautiful.
You show the image perfectly in the words painted before eyes still damp. Tears yes, but also a smile behind a smile.
better than scars on your arms or pain in your eyes. feeling a feeling of light so dark it's beautiful.
Great poem, nice complimentary image use too. Professionally presented, so sad and moving.
I get the impression you have loved a person from your past and you dearly wish it was still ongoing and not over. If so, I can relate to this. I know what it feels like to want to love someone again, after being apart from them for any time. We are afraid of never finding someone like them ever again...and it can be scary.
I think that the hardest part to love is surviving it after it is over...
Gosh the pain of lost love and you portrayed this so brilliantly with your words. I love it when you write from your heart. Voting up and pressing those buttons.
What a bittersweet poem on love and loss of love. I think everyone out in hubland can relate to this.
You bring such an awesome and brave voice to triumph over love lost, and living more in hope than in grief. Write on! Makes you want to fall in love again, just to have done it, amazing!
Leptirela, this is really beautiful. I almost believe I heard your voice reading this with soft and gentle voice. Vote up and beautiful! ^^
That was beautiful and touching! Thank you.

















4elements 13 months ago
It is hard when you give so much and you only hope to get some back. i know how that feels, needing someone and them not being there. Great poem loved it.