Fall Again

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By Leptirela

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---------------------------------------------------------------------- " Look in my eyes and you will find me, but look in my heart and you will find you."
---------------------------------------------------------------------- " Look in my eyes and you will find me, but look in my heart and you will find you."

Fall Again



A decade has passed by,

or hadn't you noticed?!

there goes that 'time flies'

Leaving, was your motive.


Your hand in the hand of my heart

I feel pain in the silence dark

as you tug at my veins

waiting for my last breath,

so that you make your mark.


Your words, unconscious

like bullets aim at my heart.

You think I don't feel you?!

everytime your shooting starts?!


Tears, like snowflakes,

slide and melt into my skin.

Making pores even stronger

for the war to start within.


Whilst each word you say remains,

like a dream untold.

And every time I hear your breath

The truth begins to unfold.


Love is not in words

but more in what you show

You need to feed a hungry heart

in order to make it grow.


The more I need you the less your here

everything begins to fade.

then I close my eyes and know your near

am living in the shadow of my shade


Like a stranger you call me

and think I don't know

How much you feel my pain,

then I hear your voice and become so weak

and fall in love with you again.

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4elements 13 months ago

It is hard when you give so much and you only hope to get some back. i know how that feels, needing someone and them not being there. Great poem loved it.

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Leptirela Hub Author 13 months ago

Thanks 4elements

:) I'm now used to it

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Paradise7 Level 7 Commenter 13 months ago

Ah, the pain of a lost love. You captured it. I love that pic, too.

Johnny Love 13 months ago

great way to express the pain that follows love. Perfect company. I truly love the line,"your hand in the hand of my heart". beautiful.

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Leptirela Hub Author 13 months ago

Thank you Paradise7

Mega phat praise to Johnny Love , You are so observant

I guess it takes one to know one :)

and I'm so happy your understanding my exact feeling

I'm covering in this poem...

Johnny Love 13 months ago

You show the image perfectly in the words painted before eyes still damp. Tears yes, but also a smile behind a smile.

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Leptirela Hub Author 13 months ago

:) I write this with 'my heart in my mouth'

Johnny Love 13 months ago

better than scars on your arms or pain in your eyes. feeling a feeling of light so dark it's beautiful.

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Leptirela Hub Author 13 months ago

:)...

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Mark Bronze Level 4 Commenter 13 months ago

Great poem, nice complimentary image use too. Professionally presented, so sad and moving.

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Leptirela Hub Author 13 months ago

::Mark Bronze:: Grateful for compliments:)

indeed, sad and moving

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Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 13 months ago

I get the impression you have loved a person from your past and you dearly wish it was still ongoing and not over. If so, I can relate to this. I know what it feels like to want to love someone again, after being apart from them for any time. We are afraid of never finding someone like them ever again...and it can be scary.

I think that the hardest part to love is surviving it after it is over...

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Leptirela Hub Author 13 months ago

::Astra Nomik::

hehe You got it, absolutely right!

Yes indeed, that is the hardest thing, but even harder when truly loving and keeping it in for a long long time.

Thank you for observing, you do that so well

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acaetnna Level 6 Commenter 13 months ago

Gosh the pain of lost love and you portrayed this so brilliantly with your words. I love it when you write from your heart. Voting up and pressing those buttons.

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Leptirela Hub Author 13 months ago

Thank you ::acaetnna:

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Minnetonka Twin Level 7 Commenter 13 months ago

What a bittersweet poem on love and loss of love. I think everyone out in hubland can relate to this.

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Leptirela Hub Author 13 months ago

It sure is of lost love. And of course, many people will relate, It's deep.

Thank you for your visit :: Minnetonka Twin::

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Fluffy77 13 months ago

You bring such an awesome and brave voice to triumph over love lost, and living more in hope than in grief. Write on! Makes you want to fall in love again, just to have done it, amazing!

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Freya Cesare Level 4 Commenter 11 months ago

Leptirela, this is really beautiful. I almost believe I heard your voice reading this with soft and gentle voice. Vote up and beautiful! ^^

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ExoticHippieQueen Level 6 Commenter 11 months ago

That was beautiful and touching! Thank you.

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