Go, May God Be with you
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Go , May God be with you
I can touch you from here.
Forgiveness, you do not need
I forgave myself for you.
Go, May God be with you
for I cannot,
Happiness, I wish you
what less?!
Go, May God be with you
leave me be in this mess.
I've left a secret in each letter of your name,
so take that with you too..
Go, May God be with you
I'll love you just the same.
I won't lose the strength, remember
I will not give up , till the last breath i whisper
till my heart rips.
Go, May GOD be with you.
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I am a visitor from Mars earthling (although you say you are not of this earth) and I am performing a survellience check on those of you who are considered as a creative anomaly - lucky for me that I found you - and that I would like to take you home with me to show my fellow Martians that yes - there is intelligent life here on earth - and inspirational too!
Thank you habee, but I cannot compare to you :))) ...
@ epigramman :)) thank you martian :)
Assuming God exists, I think he's always with us, no matter what we think or do. Unless, of course, he's got better things to do! Thanks for the poem. Later!
Epigramman really is from "out there somewhere"! We went to different schools together.
hahhahah indeed Micky Dee... though we are all outsiders of some sort.
wow it took my breath away u can rhyme
Good writing and clever rhyme scheme. Very enjoyable.
I shall,and let it be the same in your spirit.
You said it well.
Thank you ::Apostle Jack::
habee Level 7 Commenter 23 months ago
Beatiful, and very inspiring!