Hear my calling

By Leptirela

Calling

Above the clouds within the sky

I see my face , I begin to cry

knowing that your far away

Tears confirming Im here to stay.

I wont give up, you know this

If you werent in my life

its something I would miss

I speak with my heart in my mouth

all over again

I speak with my soul blank

Theres so much pain.

If your hearts set to le me go

then admit it and do so.

But please dont forget our story

let us live from memory

Both of us have so much to face

... urm...Gosh your so hard to replace.

I need your arms and love tonight

I need you in my sight all night

let this be another BYE

because you know ...

for you id die...

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4elements 10 months ago

Beautiful

Leptirela Hub Author 10 months ago

thank you 4elements :))

Micky Dee Level 4 Commenter 9 months ago

You have a beautiful heart.

epigramman 8 months ago

.... such a lovely title my friend with endearing words to match it .... always so great to hear from you and I sincerely hope you've had a happy safe and productive summer .... fall is upon us here in Canada as I send these warm wishes to you from lake erie time 3:50pm ontario canada

Leptirela Hub Author 8 months ago

Epi :) Epiii... Thank you for the -warmth- ..

I have had a great summer (with those odd days in between) hehe

Love you! ... Your Bosnian friend!

writer20 Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

you've written a beautiful poem full of meaning. Loved it. voted up and awesome.

Leptirela Hub Author 5 months ago

thank you for kind comments writer20

and welcome :)

Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 4 months ago

Told with grace and it shines with truth.... that is one of the many reasons I love reading your hubs... they are so real to me... :)

Deborah Brooks 4 months ago

so beautiful and heartfelt.. You are very good with words.. so nice to meet a fellow poet that loves to write about romance.. My favorite kind of Poetry.

Happy New Year

Debbie

kenneth avery Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

12/27/2011

Dear Leptirela, Great Read! Amazing poem. Did you enter the Poetry Contest by HubPages? If you didn't, why not? This is amazing stuff. LOVED it. My poem interests are abstract/prose. I have but a few on hubs, "Losing Her," "One Evening at Dusk," and "A Final Glimpse," some may not understand or appreiciate my use of methaphors, but some might. I hope you do. And I am honored to FOLLOW YOU. And Wish for YOU a Wonderful, Happy New Year. I Cordially Invite YOU to read a few of my hubs which WILL make you laugh. And I also extend that same cordial invitation to you to follow me. What a great way to start off the new year. Highest Regards to one talented, cool writer, Leptirela. Kenneth Avery from Hamilton, a small town in northwest Alabama that looks like Mayberry, the town on the Andy Griffith Show. I will be looking for you. Much peace and love to you.

kenneth avery Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

PS: @ Leptirela...I got so carried away talking to you I forgot to tell you that I voted UP and away on your hub. Loved it.

Leptirela Hub Author 4 months ago

Thank you so much Astra Nomik :)

you always know how to read me in my poetry

Debbie welcome to my Hubs

I cannot wait to get to know your style too

HAPPY NEW yEAR TO YOU ALL!!!

Hello Kenneth

I don't remember if I entered a poetry competition on HUbs

I guess when its on am not here

or it just simply slips by me :)

I will keep a lookout in the future

and perhaps, join in :)

I will definately visit your hub pages

and observe ... a simple poem says a lot about

the writer/poet and am happy you have found me too.

I WISH YOU THE BEST IN THE NEW YEAR 2012 :)

AND THANKS FOR VOTE UP

kenneth avery Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Leptirela . . .you are very welcome my talented friend. And it's my sincere pleasure to vote UP and all across when a hub deserve it--and this one DID. Happy 2012 to you and I invite you to follow me. That would be a great way to start 2012.

Sincerely, Kenneth