I smile

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By Leptirela

I smile

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I smile


Warm breeze dancing on my skin,
feelings rush whilst swimming in my hot veins,
I smile, I remember back.


Back to summers of loneliness and pain,
betrayal and heartache, and the rest
I smile, I feel stronger.


Stronger than I ever was
as I fight the fears of the pastime wrongs
I smile, I say a
prayer.


I say a prayer and ask forgiveness,
for myself and those who took part
I smile, and realise why they slipped.


Slipped because they know no different,
this is not a fault of mine.
I smile and accept who I am now.

David Gray - Smile

Comments

rajpravin431 profile image

rajpravin431 2 years ago

Beautiful and mood freshning.

\Brenda Scully 2 years ago

very nice, hope to hear more from you.... you have talent

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Leptirela Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you :) , hehe talent? well I feel something constantly boiling within me to just come out in words :) and now and then I just release it ..thank you both x

\Brenda Scully 2 years ago

why not........

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rajpravin431 2 years ago

" I smile, I say a prayer.

I say a prayer and ask forgiveness, for myself and those who took part I smile, and realise why they slipped."

This part is so wonderful, can I quote this part and use it for twitter.

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 2 years ago

This is beautiful. :)

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Leptirela Hub Author 2 years ago

thanks all==== Raj go ahead quote me happy

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Drew Breezzy 2 years ago

I like this :D

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Tom Cornett Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

I read it and smiled. :)

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Leptirela Hub Author 2 years ago

thanks peeps :))))) and may ya'all keep smiling

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prasetio30 Level 8 Commenter 2 years ago

great poems. I hope we always smile everyday. enjoy this life and full it up with smiling.

\Brenda Scully 2 years ago

saw this again and guess what smiled

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 2 years ago

Ahhhh, indeed! BIG SMILES! :D I have a feeling you are closer than one may think, eh? :)

Miss Take 2 years ago

nice one closer still now

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brightforyou Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

nice!

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Leptirela Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you all - again for your comments =)

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LewisBa 2 years ago

ooo mann,I remained speechless, each cas

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Leptirela Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you LewisBa :))) your comments ALWAYS MAKE SMILE in fact YOU MAKE ME SMILE :)

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Trish_M Level 6 Commenter 2 years ago

Poetry is a very good medium for expressing one's inner self, and I feel that it your special way of explaining yourself and your feelings. Great! :)

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Leptirela Hub Author 2 years ago

yes Trish absolutely right :)) and thank you

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Lewisoni 11 months ago

Thank God for your smile on your face, thank God we sent you in my life, thank God for all....your Lewisba :)

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Leptirela Hub Author 4 months ago

:) thank you lewisoni

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Frank Atanacio Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Lep.. there is so much to this poem.. genuine bunch of words.. of course I smile too after reading your work :)

Leptirela profile image

Leptirela Hub Author 4 months ago

Frank Thank you once again for stopping by

I hope this made you smile it has a happy end

usually I'm so ...dark !

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