Reflections Lie - poezija/poetry

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By Leptirela

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Reflections Lie

 You once told me am beautiful, you said my eyes are 'the windows to my soul' ,

 you held me close and felt my skin, you saw the worst and best within.

 You once cried and tried so hard, only to forget and give and let- Fate play with our lives.

 

My heart thrives in sadness, tired wet and withdrawn , yet no sign of red hot boiling blood or

beat that was once music to love making. Be it now or never you have to be told, before your

 dead too tired or old. I wont need , you to read or set your eyes on these words,and those

 I spent already wanting you to feel-

 

You still exist in my shadow, I know this because you follow me from the darkness with one eye

oh won't you try and set me free , I know your inside waiting to burst

you possessed me , I'm dying of thirst.

 

The mirror lies, when I look at my eyes I see more of you,

I try and try and get sick of trying, to convince them all my reflection is lying

I cannot see me...

All I see is a grayed 'old-bird' dried out eyes of the blue see,

 

The mirror lies when the heart cries that 'old bird' can't be me.

You came and took and went to leave me, waved a long goodbye,

I cannot get with it , the time passed by,

like 4 hours every minute.

You lied when you cried and tried so hard, I am not beautifull

The beauty you saw deep in my eyes so clear and pure

was you.

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kimberlyslyrics Level 6 Commenter 2 years ago

Really great piece

Instafan here

Cheers

Kimberly

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Micky Dee Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Very very pretty. I feel like this poem often. Thank you Leptirela!

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Leptirela Hub Author 2 years ago

:) Thank you both

Johnny Love 13 months ago

In the mirror am I not beautiful? am I really just a reflection of a heart so bruised and broken? Fate has nothing on you, what you feel i feel is all we have left at times. Even if his tears were lies, lie he did well. I do understand, or feel i do, but all in all it is only you looking back in the mirror in which you stand before.

Lovely indeed the image of beautiful pain.

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Leptirela Hub Author 13 months ago

:) Indeed Johnny, just like that!

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Astra Nomik Level 6 Commenter 13 months ago

Very moving as I read this again. A love can't be love unless it is honest. And feelings must be honestly felt and honestly spoken. It is a painful feeling to experience, like the flower needing water for sustenance but the hot summer is unrelenting and gives none... Your poetry always make me think, Milena. Thank you for sharing this.

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Leptirela Hub Author 13 months ago

And thank you for leaving a scratch ::Astra Nomik:

You too are amazing with words, I've said this before.

But your analyzing is even better :)

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Fluffy77 11 months ago

WOW! moving, sad, and a struggle for survival. Very dramatic a bit of a thriller too. You have so much to give here as a writer. This is easy for me to see.

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Leptirela Hub Author 4 months ago

great obs Fluffy77

I have a lot more yes... hahaha only sometimes the BLOCK

hits and then am kind of away for a while

but come back like a bull in a china shop

and dont know where to put all the words :)

thanks for stopping by

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